Honestly, the anatomy isn't very bad. It just looks so off because the torso is way too short. Other than that, the proportions are pretty accurate.

My only other suggestion would be to lighten the color/thicken the stuff (intestines?) coming out of him. It kind of looks like he's bleeding hair. There'd also be a lot more blood, but that's just nitpicking.

Oh man, it's my favorite rare pairing!

I love sadistic Engi for the strangest reasons...

There are a few pics missing in his gallery regarding this series.

although I don't really like animu styles personally, I really like how you constructed his nose and eyes in this.
My only problem really is that I think his earlobe should not be so large, and the entire ear itself should recede back a bit more. It should cling to the area where the very back of the zygomatic bone and behind the jawbone connect.

polite sage for nitpicky crit.

>>4099

I totally own the book this is from

yeah I agree the ear kind of looks like its melding in with his cheek right now. Other than that I think it's pretty good,especially the arms and torso area.

Given the name of the image, I'm doubting OP is the artist.

Google helped me find the original image here: http://ziznine69.deviant art.com/art/come-on-tuf-guy-159737254

Well that doesn't make any since! necrophilia for ya oi? who came up with that for a word filter?

That sounds like something a troll would do. No offense to the admins, but why the strange choice in words and why have a word filter in the first place?

>>4050

It’s ‘chan tradition. ‘Ya-oi’ is wordfiltered because it invokes an anime-esque association to pretty-boy bishies; TF2chan regulars prefer their grizzled middle-aged mercenaries, well, just that. (As for being something a troll would do, I have actually used the wordfilter to troll the trolls - http://writingcyan.tumblr.com/post/11050326488/having-fun-with-trolls - seriously, unexpected necrophilia is never not funny!).

The wordfilters for FF.net and DA are in place to prevent people from spamming the forum with off-site links – I’m not sure when/how it was a problem in the past, but basically users are encouraged to upload their works directly to the ‘chan for comments and critique. Since both FF.net and DA forbid explicit art and stories in their terms of use (and both sites actively purge X-rated works if discovered) it makes sense to upload such material here anyway, at least in /afanfic/ and /afanart/.

Personally, I’ve gotten used to the wordfilters and quite like them – except the one for tumblr, which I also believe was removed recently. I guess I’ll find out when posting this reply.

>>4030

>at least he has the sense to use a toy with a flared base, otherwise he'd have a lot of explaining to do with Medic.

As an ER doctor, I approve of the use of flare-based anal plugs. As a Medic/Scout shipper, I’d rather enjoy seeing a furiously blushing Scout explaining to Medic exactly why he needs a sturdy latex glove, the big bottle of medical-grade lube, and someone else’s fingers up where he just can’t reach...

Well in that case I apologize for any trouble I may have caused with my previous posts. I never been to 4chan or any other chan site then this one. I always thought 4chan was a troll site to be honest, so I avoided it like the plague.

As for my post about flair based toys, I'm glad you found it funny in some way. I was hoping to get a few laughs from it.

>>4016
good to be back. Got some engies that I need to unload after the long hiatus.

Emzy do you have a web site?

>>4043

I have a tumblr I use as my dumping grounds?
http://emzyzee.tumblr.com/

>>3843

I suck at critique, so instead I'll just say I think this is hot. Dat overbite. Seriously, I love when people draw Scout looking like the rat-faced little bastard he is. He's awesome.

A commission for Perry!
Was really fun. Also my first Helmet party?

>>3984

I'm not Perry, but I still approve of this. It's adorable.

Scrunchy Sniper and Demoman, who looks weird without his facial hair. Sniper's pose in this one is supposed to be intentionally awkward, but I'm still worried about whether or not everything lines up right.

>>3369
I've put a coloured version of this one in /afanart/, but I am always grateful for your feedback, Dot.

Demoman's feet look too small for him. That's the only thing that jumps out at me right now.

Aaaa I hate furniture. Also, why does Heavy's head always seem too big or too small?

>>3374

I ended up blowing his legs up a bit even before seeing this, but you were definitely right.

>>3245

A little WIP. WOW it's been a long time since I last posted in this thread!
Critique is welcome with open arms, as always.

>>3375 OHGODSHITSOMEBODYHELPIt looks just fine. A little backlighting to make his black aura of pantshitting more evident, and you might want to crop and/or distort the composition a bit to put more focus on that freakyass face. Both will help to give the drawing a little more impact, example provided. Or do whatever you want to do. Listen to your heart or whatever.

>>3950
Whoa, that's a rare pairing. Oh, Sniper. He looks exactly like in the game. I always see him as a gloomy, unsatisfied person (especially when Spies backstab him or something). And I adore Demo. Perfect.

>>3950

This picture is perfect.

Oh my god. I haven't been to this chan in a many months. Hot damn, you've improved drastically. Not only in anatomy and creativity with poses and such, but also with coloring.

It's so good to see someone improving when a lot of fanartists stay very stagnant. It's clear at this point that you are very talented, especially to improve so much over what is honestly a short amount of time.

It's inspiring to see someone try so hard and improve so much.

I admire you.

Now something with dicks in it.

It's so beautiful. I love the way you color.

>>3927 This is everything I love. Especially the look on Sniper's face, and the pinkness on the elbows/shoulders.