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No. 1407
Okay, man. I didn't want to say this, but... You're probably just going to have to start from scratch with this one. From the domestic abuse, to the head trauma, to the amnesia, to her relations with RED and BLU and why she even decided to become a merc in the first place... It just sounds like you're way over your head with this.
The more we talk, the more it seems like this character is making a nosedive into full-fledged Mary Sue-dom. Once you start referring to anime as one of your sources of inspiration, you know you've got a problem.
I'm really sorry and I wish I didn't have to say this, but it really is for the best. Maybe try to start over with a simpler topic, find out how to make realistic characters and such, then tackle this later.
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